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The

lecturer claims that ...( 可用个从句 比如 the new policy, which

...., will ..)

This

claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage, which suggests

that...

First,

the lecturer argues that...(according to the lecture,...)

This

is because ...,(which means... 转述一下).

Clearly,

the professor's argument disproves it's counterpart in the reading that...

Moreover,

the professor believes that... Then he supports this point with the fact

that...(In other words, 转述一下...)

This

point of view is in marked contrast to the assertion in the reading passage

that...,

Finally,

regarding xxx(xx话题) the lecturer contends that..

He/She

proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that...

This

is in direct contradiction with the claim in the reading passage that...

All

in all, on the basis of the evidences presented, the professor clearly

identifies the weakness(wrong parts) in the reading passage and forcefully show

that...(主题句) .

注意用词的替换, 不要老用because 啊 because of啊 也不只是换成due to啊 还可以先讲目的再讲做法, 比如in order to , for the

sake of 等等。

上文就是托福综合写作满分模板,希望大家对照模板来认真研究,最好的是能够自己来创作更适合的。照搬不是好的方法,希望大家能够不断创新进取,加油!这是从新动态的老师那里学到的。

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