The
lecturer claims that ...( 可用个从句 比如 the new policy, which
...., will ..)
This
claim is not in agreement with that of the reading passage, which suggests
that...
First,
the lecturer argues that...(according to the lecture,...)
This
is because ...,(which means... 转述一下).
Clearly,
the professor's argument disproves it's counterpart in the reading that...
Moreover,
the professor believes that... Then he supports this point with the fact
that...(In other words, 转述一下...)
This
point of view is in marked contrast to the assertion in the reading passage
that...,
Finally,
regarding xxx(xx话题) the lecturer contends that..
He/She
proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that...
This
is in direct contradiction with the claim in the reading passage that...
All
in all, on the basis of the evidences presented, the professor clearly
identifies the weakness(wrong parts) in the reading passage and forcefully show
that...(主题句) .
注意用词的替换, 不要老用because 啊 because of啊 也不只是换成due to啊 还可以先讲目的再讲做法, 比如in order to , for the
sake of 等等。
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